I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of
the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she words very hard.
We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me
that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks
one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out
of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .
She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire.
Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.
第一行：who’s改为whose . 第二行：去but 第三行：on改为in ;talk后加about